00:00 Writing is hard, especially under deadline
00:20 Sentence-level corrections won't save you if your message isn't clear
00:31 Cut the "since the dawn of time" opening
01:03 Write claim-based topic sentences
01:48 Make sure people are doing thing in your sentences ...
02:18 ... unless you don't want them to be doing things
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